INSOMNIA
by
Vincent H. Ly
reelgold@hotmail.com
(c) 2001, Vincent H. Ly
(562)305-8659
INT: BEDROOM-MIDNIGHT
A young women in her 20's sits at her desk, the nights glare
screeches through the window, very tired, as she writes a
seemingly long letter. By
her appearance her eyes are weary,
her hair messed up, it seems that she hasn't been to sleep in
a while. The room is lit,
only by a small desk lamp and a
flame from a few candles. The
room is apparently messy and
bottles of pills line the desktop.
MELISSA (V.O.)
Sleep. A state of partial or
full
unconsciousness in people and
animals during which voluntary
functions are suspended and the
body rests and restores itself,
its hard to imagine how something
so little, could be often
over-looked.
CUT TO:
(Please note all the "CUT TO" Scenes will be featured in a
obscure color or video type. or the * sign will let you know
its a flashback sequence.)
*We See MELISSA Sleeping in her bed, quietly, she seems so at
peace. An Arm is draped around her.
Her body warmly snuggled
to the blanket, the peaceful look that relaxes throughout her
body. She rustles a bit, but still at complete ease.
MELISSA (V.O.)
How I could remember those days,
like they were yesterday. Going
to bed after a long day's work,
being able to lie there
peacefully, taking all the hard
days wear and tear, and putting it
away as I closed the day... in the
most peaceful state one could be
in...
CUT
OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-MIDNIGHT
MELISSA continues writing her letter, taking a sip of the
coffee on the table, then proceeding back to the letter. We
feature a shot on her wedding ring.
MELISSA (V.O.)
It's hard to imagine, but I haven't
been asleep in 4 days, but somehow
i just don't feel like i should
sleep,
why should i rest? what do
I really have to rest for?
The pencil suddenly breaks at the tip.
MELISSA
(exhausted)
Damn...
She lets out a sigh, and walks over to the sharpener.
(WE
PAN OVER AND SEE THE LETTER VAGUELY, AS IT APPEARS TO BE ONE
OF GREAT LENGTH, BUT WITHOUT KNOWING ANY OF THE WORDS BEING
WRITTEN)
MELISSA walks back to her chair at the desk... first gazing
at the time on the clock which reads (2:01AM).
MELISSA
(continuing;
sarcastic
and
incoherent)
Only 2 am? well 5 more hours
till
the sun gets up... There's
something to look forward too...
Seemingly very depressed, and saddened for some unknown
reason, she sits back down at her desk and continues to write
away aimlessly. A soft yawn
escapes her face.
MELISSA (V.O.)
So I haven't slept in 2 weeks, who
ever said humans need to
sleep,
(slight pause and
chuckle)
they have the
gall to call it a
problem... sure the doctors
gave
me some pills for my condition,
they called it INSOMNIA, a word
coined from the Latin term
insomnis, meaning "sleepless"...
The inability to fall asleep, or
to remain asleep long enough to
feel rested...
(SERIES OF QUICK CUT BACKS TO THE FLOOR, WHERE TONS OF BOOKS
LIE, WE CUT ONE TO ANOTHER REALLY QUICK)
MELISSA (V.O.)
(continuing)
As you can see, i've learned a lot
during this time, actually learned
to read for the first time
(slight sarcastic
laugh)
She drinks a sip from the coffee, still showing signs of
tiredness, she puts the cup down and spills a little bit of
it on her clothes.
CUT TO:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*Please note this is a flashback
moment*)
MELISSA sits at her desk(*fully lit house*)in a prior moment
in her life, writing, she has just spilled Coffee on herself
as she is writing.
MELISSA
Oh Melissa, what a klutz you are...
(She laughs and
shakes her head)
As she wipes herself clean, The power along with the lights
suddenly turn out, we hear some rattling outside in an eerie
moment. A look of concern
rustles through her face. She
sternly stands up and walks to the window.
MELISSA
(continuing)
Umm, Hello?
She looks out the window. She see's nothing and closes the
blinds. She goes back to her
desk, lighting a candle to
provide light for her writing.
CUT OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-MIDNIGHT
She sits back at her desk, staring at the wall,the pencil
firmly pressed against her temple, in a deep hypnotic gaze.
MELISSA (V.O.)
How the slightest noise, can bring
back the most horrific memories...
memories of which I tried to
forget...
memories that still loom
in my mind, till this day, from
which I cannot escape...
Saddened MELISSA looks back to her notepad, gazing at the
words that are at her fingertips. She
slowly runs her
fingers across the writing.
MELISSA (V.O.)
(continuing)
Was it ever meant to be?
(slight
pause)
Could it have been fate? A
force
or Principle believed to
predetermined events? Could
all
the events that transpired that
night, made it so, that only one
outcome could have occurred.
CUT TO:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FLASHBACK*)
MELISSA sits at her desk, staring at the wall, it is still
dark, with the power in the house still presently off.
MELISSA
(to herself)
What time is it?
She looks at the clock it reads 2:32AM
MELISSA
(continuing;
concerned)
God, I hate being home alone, i
wish my hunny was here, I hate it
when he's out of town...
She lets out a sigh.
WE FLASH TO A SERIES OF SHOTS OF BOTTLES OF PILLS, MAINLY
SLEEP AID PILLS.
CUT OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-MIDNIGHT
WE FLASH TO A SERIES OF SHOTS OF BOTTLES OF PILLS.
THIS TIME
MORE THAN IT WAS INT HE PREVIOUS FLASHBACK SCENE.
MELISSA sighs and goes back to her writing, she is growing
more and more tired.
MELISSA (V.O.)
They call it a state of
dependence, a need for something
or somebody to be available in
order for one to exist or
survive...
She drops the pencil and slowly moves her hand across her
face, somehow feeling what she is touching is no
longer the
face she use to know... (* A Strong feeling as though you
aren't who you thought you were*)
CUT TO:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FLASHBACK*)
MELISSA moves her fingers across her face, when she is
startled by noises of a DOOR OPENING.
She jumps up from her seat. A
look of grave freight glooms
over her innocent face. We
HEAR THE DOOR BEING KICKED OPEN.
INT: HALLWAY (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS STILL A FLASHBACK*)
We see footsteps walking strongly across the floor, each
thump gets louder and louder.
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FLASHBACK*)
MELISSA sits back down on her chair, a look of dumbfounded is
easily read across her face.
INT: HALLWAY (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS STILL A FLASHBACK*)
The footsteps continue to grow and the thumps louder.
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FLASHBACK*)
Her Heart beats harder with each foot thump she hears, they
almost coincide with one another.
Her face is almost expressionless, her intentions unknown.
The door starts to rattle slowly, the intent is out of fear.
CUT
OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT
MELISSA's face sinks deeper into a scared state, she gulps,
and shuts her eyes. She opens the drawers of her desk, it
reveals a gun, her hand reluctantly reaches for it.
MELISSA (V.O.)
In my hands I was holding
something capable of bringing
about DEATH... The destruction or
extinction
of something...
CUT TO:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FLASHBACK*)
MELISSA's hand holds the gun up, she is scared.
MELISSA
(V.O.)
But i had weird premonition on
what was going on, a strong
feeling, without a rational
basis...
The sounds of the footsteps and doorknob, rattling are
forever still present from the time they started, they have
not lessened, much to her surprise, they only grew...
CUT OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT
MELISSA holds the gun in close to her face, she looks deeply
at the gun. Memorized by it...
CUT TO:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS
IS A FLASHBACK*)
She looks at the Gun, scared.
The Door continues to Rattle, as everything seems like it's in
Super Slow Motion.
The door finally opens, a shadowy figure appears, and slowly
walks from behind her and without any hesitation MELISSA
turns and fires the gun.
MELISSA
Nooooooooo!!!!
The body slumps forward onto the
cold floor. Blood dripping
from his chest..
MELISSA rushes to the floor, picks up the body onto her lap.
She spots a picture frame, dropped on the floor by the person.
Blood tickles on her fingertips.
CUT OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT
She is slumped to the floor (*in the same position as the
flashback*) MELISSA shudders in pure horror.
Her face is
breathless, her mouth hangs open in shock.
*Close-Up* Her
finger tips run through her face, dragging it blood.
MELISSA looks down, seeing in shock her chest oozing with
blood.
She slowly falls to the floor, looking from a distant she
spots a picture of her and her husband.
Her hand reaches to the picture on the floor (which shows her
and her husband in a loving moment). Dragging Blood onto it.
CUT TO:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT (*PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FLASHBACK*)
MELISSA lies slumped over, as she sea's she has just killed
her husband.. She falls on top of him, a tear rolls down her
cheek.. as she slowly, softly cries.
CUT OUT:
INT: BEDROOM-NIGHT
A small cry, melts itself from her lifeless body, she lies
facedown on the cold floor, blood rapidly flowing from her
body, her eyes open, her body motionless.
MELISSA (V.O.)
(Very soft spoken and
exhausted in state,
with a calm
atmosphere)
I guess in a state of calm and
serenity, I can finally be at
peace...
Her eyes finally shut. The
gun is off on the ground, the
picture within her reaching grasps, the blood flowing
majestically from her body.
FADE OUT:
FADE IN:
AS THE CREDITS ROLL:
We see the picture frame within her hand. blood trickles the
edges of the picture. The
picture suddenly starts to animate
and with it, shows the point in time of the picture and the
love they both had once held.